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Besides carving the shit sometimes I write some articles for it to be issued at the request of the magazine, whose name does not mention this time. Both I and my editor, these articles have many problems. Once, for example, the person in the store by the customer, on my recommendation of books Cinnamon Shops, sounding "the book probably does not need anyone to recommend," she said, that as you do not need, not everyone knows what a book.

This time, however, is to check your text, korektorka so., crossed herself. I wrote a text about tea and ... I learned that too often use the word in it tea . Counted as a future engineer - in fact, at about 1820 words of the article until it is one hundred different forms of expression tea, which gives approximately 5.5%. In comparison - in an article on tea in Wikipedia used the words tea 5.75%. So it's kind of standard that how to write about tea, it takes so the word is from 5 to 6% of the article.

However, as the former and would-be Polish language I have to actually say it is scandalous that a word appears so often. After all, as early as kindergarten learn that you need to use synonyms. Perhaps

Word:
  • tea,
  • tea, coffee
  • ,
  • jackdaw,
  • Bavarian,
  • tea, refreshments
  • ,
  • at-home.
Well probably not, although the word coffee seems to be a tempting alternative for the word Tea . even more tempting alternative is the word tea.

This may head:
  • brew from the leaves of tea tree (there is an adjective tea - not good),
  • brew characterized by the presence of tannins,
  • infusion of these leaves,
  • often drunk by the Chinese drink (though it is not exactly good, because the lady checked the Internet - where it interesting? - and learned that it was not in China, tea is the most popular, only in Japan and India),
  • what parzymy in a glass, drink
  • from the leaves of the brown color (black tea)
  • drink from the leaves of the color of urine (green tea),
  • is such a thing, what you drink,
  • is, what is the article,
  • this-widget - you know.
I also have another suggestion: every second occurrence of the word tea the short term drink, every third - the tea, a quarter of - coffee, and fifth in the beef. In this way, I get the following passage:
oxidation are not subject to the list (1) white tea, green, yellow, and Pu-erh. Among them the most important place is green (2) drink. Not only is the most popular, but all other can be determined as its derivatives. Green (3) tea is simply dried leaves quickly. Drying must be carried out smoothly, had not managed to turn yellow leaves. Sometimes, however, allows them to do so - thus forming a very yellow (4) coffee. The difference between the green and white (5) beef is primarily a raw material from which they are produced.

last sentence gives even make sense, but in my view, difference between white and green beef is rather a time to store, not a raw material. However, as you can see, the diversity once served the text. Finally, we should strive for wieloświatopoglądowego society as a normal urge prof. Szyszkowska .

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